How to Nail Your Elevator Pitch (Without Sounding Like a Robot)
There’s something about talking about yourself in under a minute that makes even the most confident people sound… mechanical.
You start strong, then halfway through, you hear yourself saying things like “results-driven professional” or “leveraging cross-functional expertise”—and immediately regret it.
That’s the elevator pitch trap.
But here’s the truth: a good elevator pitch isn’t about sounding smart. It’s about being clear, real, and memorable. It’s about sparking a conversation, not delivering a speech.
Let’s break down what actually works—and what doesn’t.
First, Nobody Wants a Resume Recap
People already scan a hundred profiles a week. They don’t want another neatly packed list of your job titles and skills.
What they want—what actually holds attention—is a person talking like a person.
Instead of saying, “I’m a final-year mechanical engineering student interested in product development,”
try, “I love building things people can actually use—and right now, I’m trying to figure out how to do that at scale.”
See the difference? It’s not about polishing every word. It’s about being real.
Your Pitch Isn’t for Everyone, and That’s Okay
Don’t try to impress everyone in one sentence. Speak to your people.
If you’re into health tech, let that show. If you’re obsessed with storytelling, say that. You’ll lose a few listeners—but you’ll attract the right ones.
You don’t need everyone’s attention. Just the right attention.
Be Specific About What You Want
This part matters more than people think.
If you’re open to internships, say it. If you’re looking for collaborators, mention that. If you’re still exploring, it’s okay to say that too.
A vague “I’m open to opportunities” rarely sticks. But “I’m looking to work with a small, mission-driven team in the sustainability space” gives people something to remember—and respond to.
You Don’t Need to Sound Brilliant—You Just Need to Sound Like Yourself
Here’s the truth most career blogs won’t tell you: People remember genuine energy more than perfect structure.
You’re not applying for a role in the elevator. You’re trying to connect. And connection comes from clarity, confidence, and authenticity—not buzzwords.
So What Makes a Great Elevator Pitch?
It’s short.
It’s honest.
It hints at who you are and what you care about.
And it leaves space for the other person to say, “Tell me more.”
